I recently edited a translation of a Chinese short story,
which needed some polishing up although it was fairly well written – or
translated.
The most significant improvement I could make – apart from
ensuring that all dialogue was duly given its own line – was to find lots of
appropriate synonyms for the verb "to say". English, with its rich lexicon of
synonyms from Anglo Saxon and Latin, has plenty to offer to replace “say” and “said”.
Intrigued, I decided to find a list on www.thesaurus.com . Replacements for “say”, according to the
context, could include: “add”, “declare”, “suggest”, “imply”, “relate”, “remark”,
“opine” or “rap”.
So there you are, budding English writers – vary your
vocabulary and use your thesaurus well. But with such a huge list to take your
pick from, it might be difficult to find the appropriate words for what you
want to say – or shall we say “express”?
That is precisely what we love to do at www.writeitclearly.com − find the right words for the right context and use them wisely!
I'm not sure I agree with this. Read Catch-22. No speaker ever "says" anything. Rather they:
ReplyDeleteobserve
agree
cry
ask
answer
correct
concede
repeat
tell
reply
Frankly, after a while, you long for the characters just to "say" something.
Just my opinion!